Sunday, November 11, 2012

In My Place

image found at The Pink Papers

I really try to do as you say
I will look you in the eyes when you place your hand beneath my chin
I will listen to and accept your words
I will undress when you tell me to
I will lay or bend where you request
Presenting my bottom for it's impending doom

But when your hand comes crashing down on my flesh

I will not stay in place

I will submit to you

But I cannot do so silently and unmoving

I know you understand this

That's why you are deserving of my submission in the first place

I will cry out

I will kick

I will squirm from side to side in a failed attempt to dissipate the burn

I will plead with you to stop

You will look at me and wait until I put myself back in position

Because I always do

You can tie my hands and feet

And I will still move

You can grab my hair in your fist

And I will still moan

I can only be me

The squirmy spanko


Anonymous said...


Beautifully said and very erotic. I wonder if tops really believe they can beat our bottoms and we are supposed to stay still and keep quiet?

Terrific post. Loved it.


SNP said...

Great poetry on your part Lea. You captured the spanking process well:) Hugs.

Susie said...

Nice poem Lea!

Squirmy? Oh yeah!

kiwigirliegirl said...

great poem, as SNP said you have captured the spanking process so well - i do all of the same things and then some! My poor Sir - its a wonder he continues - but like Joey said, how can they expect us to stay still - it hurts!
Hugs kiwi xxx

SpankCake said...

Lovely poem, Lea! I love how the quiet nature of the poem captures such loud emotions.


Anonymous said...

I love the way that a piece of art can inspire more art. What a lovely way to give a voice to that intriguing picture! Nice job, Lea!


Fondles said...

Brilliant. and like Joey says, we can't NOT move... it's a natural reaction. not something we can control... even tho i try my darndest!!

playful little brat said...

moving and squirming are just bound to happen, lol. Great piece of writing, I enjoyed it.

Lea said...

@joey, Glad you enjoyed it! I think tops believe a lot of things that aren't realistic. Lol.

@SNP, Thanks! Glad you liked it!

@Susie, Thanks! I figured others would understand. ;-)

@kiwi, They certainly have high expectations, don't they?

@SpankCake, Thanks! A high compliment coming from you!

@Regan, Thank you! Glad you liked it!

@Fondles, It is the most natural of reactions!

@playful little brat, Glad you liked it! It's definitely a hard reaction to resist.

Anastasia Vitsky said...

The squirmy spanko? So cute! Aren't we all squirmy?

Anonymous said...

I really like this! Yeah, I can't stay still

Lea said...

@Ana, Not all, but apparently a lot of us are!

@Jean, Glad you liked it!

Angel said...

Loved this post. Keep writing.

Lea said...

@Angel, Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!